~*~The Life Story of Apple the Budgie~*~

[Magic Birdie]

Quote:
Yeah.. You can't force people to read your story. It's their choice wheather or not they want to read it.

I'm not forcing them to read it. If they don't want to, it's their choice.

 

[luvinmychickens]

Quote:
Yeah.. You can't force people to read your story. It's their choice wheather or not they want to read it.

I'm not forcing them to read it. If they don't want to, it's their choice.

I know. But when no one comments right away, you say your not gonna write anymore.

Ok, people! That means no more chapters today!

Like this ^

Come ON!!!!

Or this ^

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Finished it!

... and everyone poofs for the day

And this ^

But, I think you get my point now.​

 

[Magic Birdie]

Quote:
Yeah.. You can't force people to read your story. It's their choice wheather or not they want to read it.

I'm not forcing them to read it. If they don't want to, it's their choice.

I know. But when no one comments right away, you say your not gonna write anymore.

Ok, people! That means no more chapters today!

Like this ^

Come ON!!!!

Or this ^

Quote:
... and everyone poofs for the day

And this ^

But, I think you get my point now.​

I'm just annoyed that everyone is offline right after I post, ok?

 

[luvinmychickens]

Quote:
Yeah.. You can't force people to read your story. It's their choice wheather or not they want to read it.

I'm not forcing them to read it. If they don't want to, it's their choice.

I know. But when no one comments right away, you say your not gonna write anymore.

Ok, people! That means no more chapters today!

Like this ^

Come ON!!!!

Or this ^

Quote:
And this ^

But, I think you get my point now.

I'm just annoyed that everyone is offline right after I post, ok?

Your not gonna get INSTANT replies. No ones story does. If they do, their just lucky at the moment.

 

[Magic Birdie]

Quote:
Yeah.. You can't force people to read your story. It's their choice wheather or not they want to read it.

I'm not forcing them to read it. If they don't want to, it's their choice.

I know. But when no one comments right away, you say your not gonna write anymore.

Ok, people! That means no more chapters today!

Like this ^

Come ON!!!!

Or this ^


And this ^

But, I think you get my point now.​

I'm just annoyed that everyone is offline right after I post, ok?

Your not gonna get INSTANT replies. No ones story does. If they do, their just lucky at the moment.

I know.

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

Can we please have more?

 

[KWAK]

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I dont know when the next one will be up!

im mad, and i dont get out of school until 3:15 and dont get home until like 3:40

Lets not argue when Birdies has adequit time she/he will post. Don't pressure writers or they will either not write anymore or the quality of the writing will decrease.

It was a joke?

 

[Magic Birdie]

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I'll try

 

[Magic Birdie]

Chapter Sixty Four

I stayed with Leaf and Sky for two days, then told them I would go back.
Sky demanded I eat something before I go.
"Really, I'm fine! I can always look for the nearest bird feeder." I argued.
"No you're not! Bird feeders are a dangerous way to get food!"
"But your chicks need food more than I do!"
"We can always find more."
"But there might not be more."
It went on like that until Sky force fed me.
"Happy now?" I chirped right after.
"Very." Sky sounded content.
"So I'll be going. Bye!"
"Bye, Apple!" Sky called.
I took off once again.
A hawk was circling the skies above me.
Uh oh.
I landed on the nearest tree, praying that it didn't see me with it's incredible eyesight.
The hawk plunged down after me.
I took off, knowing that I would never outfly it.
But I had to try.
It was catching up to me. I had to do something.
I didn't know anything about hawks.
The first thing that appeared in my mind was the girl's house. I hadn't flown very far from it yet.
I banged on the windows.
"Let me in!!!" I screamed for my life.
The hawk was less than thirty feet away from my now.
I closed my eyes and waited to die.

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

More! I hate cliffhangers!