The Omicron Games- Mipuppy1's and my story please read

[water1997]

Note that this takes place in the year 2142.

Chapter 1:

"Wake up!" The voice jolted me from my peaceful sleep.
"Come on Alexa! Aren't you excited to be moving into our new house? I am!" I rolled over and said,
"Five more minutes Bella!"
"Come on big sis!"
"Fine!" I got up and got dressed in a black t shirt with a chibi cat on it that said "What? I'm tough!" and blue jeans. It was every middle schooler's worst nightmare to be leaving their old school and friends. The only bright spot in this sea of darkness was the fact that I, after months of begging, am finally getting a dog after the move. I sighed and finished packing the rest of my stuff. We had moved all the furniture a week ago so I only had to roll up my sleeping bag and get my phone to be ready to go. I checked my phone for texts. There was one from my best friend Erin. I read it:
[Good luck at your new house!]
Yeah right, like that was going to happen.
[I have to split a room with Bella! ] I texted back. At least we'd convinced my mom to get a divider so we could have our own rooms, more or less. I dragged my feet to get in the car.

Bella sang the whole way to the new house. Not that I cared. It finally got to me as we got to our new street and I considered pulling out my earplugs for the ten seconds that remained in the car ride, but then we pulled into our driveway. The house was made of bricks and it was square, with arching windows. The forest that surrounded it made it look like a haven for those that went there. I went in the front door.
"I hope you like your new rooms!" Mom yelled as I went upstairs. I went to my room dreading the first encounter with it, but gasped when I saw it. It was shimmering blue, with a window that overlooked a pond in the forest. The bed was my old bed, which gave some sense of familiarity to the room. I went to my new computer, which had been a late birthday present because we had been busy moving things on my birthday. I logged on and saw that it had a new game I'd never seen before. There was also a note from Mom:
[Heres the game everyone's talking about! Its so realistic that you think you're in the game! Hope you're not too disappointed about moving] I read it and smiled. Mom sure knew how to cheer me up. I pressed the icon on the holo-screen. The game blossomed around me. I was in a dark blue room that looked like it went on forever. The green text on the ceiling said,
[Please wait, analyzing you.]
I sighed and waited for it to analyze me. I wanted to look different than myself, with my black hair and brown eyes. Too bad the developers hadn't thought of including that feature.
[You have been analyzed. Please choose your in-game species.]
I tapped a button that said "fairy" and chose the button that let me have black bird wings. I made my character's name Raven and waited for it to load.The game said, [character creation complete], and the world went black. When it cleared up, I was in the game's first town.

 

[Mipuppy1]

Note that this takes place in the year 2142.

Chapter 1:

"Wake up!" The voice jolted me from my peaceful sleep.
"Come on Alexa! Aren't you excited to be moving into our new house? I am!" I rolled over and said,
"Five more minutes Bella!"
"Come on big sis!"
"Fine!" I got up and got dressed in a black t shirt with a chibi cat on it that said "What? I'm tough!" and blue jeans. It was every middle schooler's worst nightmare to be leaving their old school and friends. The only bright spot in this sea of darkness was the fact that I, after months of begging, am finally getting a dog after the move. I sighed and finished packing the rest of my stuff. We had moved all the furniture a week ago so I only had to roll up my sleeping bag and get my phone to be ready to go. I checked my phone for texts. There was one from my best friend Erin. I read it:
[Good luck at your new house!]
Yeah right, like that was going to happen.
[I have to split a room with Bella! ] I texted back. At least we'd convinced my mom to get a divider so we could have our own rooms, more or less. I dragged my feet to get in the car.

Bella sang the whole way to the new house. Not that I cared. It finally got to me as we got to our new street and I considered pulling out my earplugs for the ten seconds that remained in the car ride, but then we pulled into our driveway. The house was made of bricks and it was square, with arching windows. The forest that surrounded it made it look like a haven for those that went there. I went in the front door.
"I hope you like your new rooms!" Mom yelled as I went upstairs. I went to my room dreading the first encounter with it, but gasped when I saw it. It was shimmering blue, with a window that overlooked a pond in the forest. The bed was my old bed, which gave some sense of familiarity to the room. I went to my new computer, which had been a late birthday present because we had been busy moving things on my birthday. I logged on and saw that it had a new game I'd never seen before. There was also a note from Mom:
[Heres the game everyone's talking about! Its so realistic that you think you're in the game! Hope you're not too disappointed about moving] I read it and smiled. Mom sure knew how to cheer me up. I pressed the icon on the holo-screen. The game blossomed around me. I was in a dark blue room that looked like it went on forever. The green text on the ceiling said,
[Please wait, analyzing you.]
I sighed and waited for it to analyze me. I wanted to look different than myself, with my black hair and brown eyes. Too bad the developers hadn't thought of including that feature.
[You have been analyzed. Please choose your in-game species.]
I tapped a button that said "fairy" and chose the button that let me have black bird wings. I made my character's name Raven and waited for it to load.The game said, [character creation complete], and the world went black. When it cleared up, I was in the game's first town.

(WOOT SO PUMPED UP FOR THIS XDD! Ok anyway the room should have been pink and girly XD)

Chapter 2, The Self Aware NPC, The Girl Who Didn't Know How To Love:
Drip, Drip, Drip, What was the reason for living? That was the same question the crying girl had asked herself each and everyday her answer she came up with There wasn't one she was an object or a tool if you will used for entertainment. No one cared about her she was just another NPC casted in the Omicron games as a boss- tossed in as a means to entertain that was the reason for her existence. Then suddenly a voice interpreted her thoughts "Are you okay?" She looked up it was a male, a handsome male, with blonde hair and lightly tanned skin, he had deep forest green eyes, like the forest she lived in. She closed her eyes bracing for an attack she knew he would be gone the second she opened them again.
But none came
He was an idiot a total fool. He was battling nymphs he easily beat the low level yellow robed nymphs. So he ventured deeper into the forest he easily killed the red robed nymphs green, pink, blue, then before he knew it he reached the purple robed nymphs it was to late to turn back he was surrounded by nymphs he was out of potions so he had no choice but to go ahead. That Was The Biggest Mistake Of His Life. His friend had told him about the nymph NPC boss a few months ago, at first she was a sweet, defenseless, cute, lonely, crying girl once you approached her though her crystal necklace would glow red and then she was anything but small and defenseless lv 10 NPC boss nope- she killed his friend easily and he lost 2 whole levels! Dying by those nymphs would have been less painless but it was to late to turn back once you enter a NPC bosses lair the doors closed. He looked around it was a nice place, the NPC boss girl sat in the middle of the spring on a giant lily pad she had long- and he ment LONG blonde hair she wore a pink kimono and was silently weeping to himself and he couldn't help it, it just slipped out of his mouth "Are you okay?"

 

[Mipuppy1]

(WOOT SO PUMPED UP FOR THIS XDD! Ok anyway the room should have been pink and girly XD)

Chapter 2, The Self Aware NPC, The Girl Who Didn't Know How To Love:
Drip, Drip, Drip, What was the reason for living? That was the same question the crying girl had asked herself each and everyday her answer she came up with There wasn't one she was an object or a tool if you will used for entertainment. No one cared about her she was just another NPC casted in the Omicron games as a boss- tossed in as a means to entertain that was the reason for her existence. Then suddenly a voice interpreted her thoughts "Are you okay?" She looked up it was a male, a handsome male, with blonde hair and lightly tanned skin, he had deep forest green eyes, like the forest she lived in. She closed her eyes bracing for an attack she knew he would be gone the second she opened them again.
But none came
He was an idiot a total fool. He was battling nymphs he easily beat the low level yellow robed nymphs. So he ventured deeper into the forest he easily killed the red robed nymphs green, pink, blue, then before he knew it he reached the purple robed nymphs it was to late to turn back he was surrounded by nymphs he was out of potions so he had no choice but to go ahead. That Was The Biggest Mistake Of His Life. His friend had told him about the nymph NPC boss a few months ago, at first she was a sweet, defenseless, cute, lonely, crying girl once you approached her though her crystal necklace would glow red and then she was anything but small and defenseless lv 10 NPC boss nope- she killed his friend easily and he lost 2 whole levels! Dying by those nymphs would have been less painless but it was to late to turn back once you enter a NPC bosses lair the doors closed. He looked around it was a nice place, the NPC boss girl sat in the middle of the spring on a giant lily pad she had long- and he ment LONG blonde hair she wore a pink kimono and was silently weeping to himself and he couldn't help it, it just slipped out of his mouth "Are you okay?"

(Sorry mines not as good as yours, note that you've been on fanfiction for who knows how long long and me... .-. I know I suck)

 

[water1997]

It's really good!

 

[animallover505]

this is pretty cool!

 

[Mipuppy1]

this is pretty cool!

(Thanks our characters are playing a realistic game called Omicron and in the future it's developed so well you can feel the pain taste the food and you know stuff like that)

It's really good!

(Stop kidding... Waiting for next chapter I brb for about 30 minutes)

 

[animallover505]

(Nice!!)

 

[water1997]

No really I like it Mipuppy! Anyways, here's the next chapter.


Chapter 3:

The town was bustling with players, some as new as me, some experts, and some who were in between. The town itself was bright, with an organized layout. Shops on one end, meeting places on another, and roads on the last part. I tapped the bubble that said 'quests' under it and looked at my first quest. Defeat 10 imps. I can handle that if they're not too tough. I opened the enemy search and looked up 'Imp'. Ok, level 1, 10 hp, I should probably be fine once I complete the battle tutorial. I opened the tutorials menu and selected 'battle'. The game transported me to a forest that I assumed was the Shadow Forest. A window popped up that explained how to select a weapon. I was given a level one magic staff and a level one sword. The game prompted me to select the sword and as I did, it materialized in my hand. I selected one of the two demo enemies and ran up to it, swinging my sword. It took 2 damage, half it's hp. The game explained how to use special attacks on both weapons, and I switched to the staff. The demo enemy that I hadn't attacked used its attack on me. Ow! I wasn't expecting to feel pain in the game. I guess Mom wasn't kidding when she said it was realistic. I tried out a special attack for the staff and, to my surprise, it took out both enemies. They dropped a healing potion each, and after the game explained how to use items, I went to go defeat some imps.

The imps were easier than the tutorial enemies, which was odd. It might be because they had a lower speed so I could block their attacks more easily. Then an enemy I had never seen came up to me. It was a pure black dog with glowing red eyes. It lunged and I swung with my sword instinctively. It slashed through it, revealing it as a costume that was hiding the last imp that I needed to fight to complete the quest. I attacked it with a spell, the staff was becoming my favorite weapon in the game. I claimed my reward for completing the quest, a chest that I could open once I reached level 2. I tried opening it, and surprisingly it worked. I looked at my level bar and was shocked to see that I was halfway through level 2. 'The easy levels must be easy to get through.' I thought as I looked inside. There was a level 2 sword, a level 2 staff and 100 gold. I went back to the starting town, fighting more imps, and I looked around the shops. There wasn't too much I could buy with 100 gold, but I could save it up for later. I ran to the roads leading out of town. 'Where should I go first?' I thought as I surveyed the roads. At almost every one guards warned me that I wasn't strong enough to go there yet, so I went through the one labeled 'Volcanic Crater'.

There were a lot of dragon enemies, and I noticed that the volcano that it appeared that I was in looked like it was about to erupt. I battled a few dragon enemies and walked on until the end of the area. I was about to go through the door when a player I didn't know messaged me.
[Eroth: I wouldn't go in there yet.] I looked around for the source of the message, and sure enough, there was an Elven warrior named Eroth standing by the door. He had brown hair and green eyes. I decided to reply.
[Raven: Why?]
[Eroth: It's the boss chamber, there's a level 3 boss phoenix in there.]
[Raven: Well do you want to take it on together? We're both level 2, our combined strength should be enough to beat it.]
[Eroth: Sure, but I warn you, if we lose we go back to level 1.]
[Raven: Stop being such a pessimist and let's go.]
[Eroth: (Jk) ok let's go.]
We entered the boss chamber and the door closed behind us, leaving what looked like a solid slab of rock behind us. The phoenix majestically rose from its spot and flew over to us, beginning the battle. Eroth slashed at its talon, distracting it while I cast a spell of ice, freezing it for a bit.
[Raven: Get it's tail!]
[Eroth: ok]
Eroth slashed at the phoenix's tail, damaging it but spawning firebirds. Oh great, more enemies. I sent a spell at them while Eroth worked on defeating the phoenix. The firebirds got hit, effectively defeating the level one enemies, and I sent another freezing spell at the phoenix. The phoenix screeched as we struck the final blow, and it dropped a chest. We opened it, and inside was a staff, sword (both level 3), and two eggs.
[Raven: You can have the sword and an egg.]
[Eroth: Funny, I was just about to say that you could have the staff and an egg.]
We took our stuff, and a timer appeared once I picked up the egg.
[Raven: What's the egg for?]
[Eroth: It's a pet egg, and since it came from a phoenix, Im guessing its a phoenix egg.]
[Raven: Cool. Thanks]
I though he would go away after that, but he didn't. We quested the entire day, and by the end of the day, we were level 5 and ready to go to Cardinal Town. We were about to go on the road there when I heard my sister.
"Alexa! You've been on that game for hours! Mom says its time to get off!"
"One minute!" I yelled. I got on the game again.
[Raven: Mom says I got to go. Could you be on at 4 tomorrow?]
[Elroth: I'll try, if I can't be there go to Cardinal Town without me and do the quest there we can always fight the boss again.]
[Raven: Ok, see you later.] I logged off with that and went downstairs. Mom was standing there with a big smile on her face.
"Did you like the game Alexa?" she asked.
"Yeah," I said smiling.
"Dad will be here soon, and since its his first time seeing the new house because he was on a business trip, I thought we could make him dinner!" I groaned inwardly, but fake smiled as we prepared a wild rice soup for our family.

When Dad came home, we showed him around the house and ate. I wasn't paying attention too much when we talked because I was thinking about playing Omicron and how Eroth was starting to become a good friend. I did my homework to catch up to where my new classes were and then got ready to go to sleep.

Once my parents were out of the room, I opened Omicron and muted the sound, ready to immerse myself in the virtual world again. I did a quick search for Eroth and he wasn't on. I decided to wait until 4 tomorrow and I logged off and collapsed in my bed.

 

[Mipuppy1]

No really I like it Mipuppy! Anyways, here's the next chapter.


Chapter 3:

The town was bustling with players, some as new as me, some experts, and some who were in between. The town itself was bright, with an organized layout. Shops on one end, meeting places on another, and roads on the last part. I tapped the bubble that said 'quests' under it and looked at my first quest. Defeat 10 imps. I can handle that if they're not too tough. I opened the enemy search and looked up 'Imp'. Ok, level 1, 10 hp, I should probably be fine once I complete the battle tutorial. I opened the tutorials menu and selected 'battle'. The game transported me to a forest that I assumed was the Shadow Forest. A window popped up that explained how to select a weapon. I was given a level one magic staff and a level one sword. The game prompted me to select the sword and as I did, it materialized in my hand. I selected one of the two demo enemies and ran up to it, swinging my sword. It took 2 damage, half it's hp. The game explained how to use special attacks on both weapons, and I switched to the staff. The demo enemy that I hadn't attacked used its attack on me. Ow! I wasn't expecting to feel pain in the game. I guess Mom wasn't kidding when she said it was realistic. I tried out a special attack for the staff and, to my surprise, it took out both enemies. They dropped a healing potion each, and after the game explained how to use items, I went to go defeat some imps.

The imps were easier than the tutorial enemies, which was odd. It might be because they had a lower speed so I could block their attacks more easily. Then an enemy I had never seen came up to me. It was a pure black dog with glowing red eyes. It lunged and I swung with my sword instinctively. It slashed through it, revealing it as a costume that was hiding the last imp that I needed to fight to complete the quest. I attacked it with a spell, the staff was becoming my favorite weapon in the game. I claimed my reward for completing the quest, a chest that I could open once I reached level 2. I tried opening it, and surprisingly it worked. I looked at my level bar and was shocked to see that I was halfway through level 2. 'The easy levels must be easy to get through.' I thought as I looked inside. There was a level 2 sword, a level 2 staff and 100 gold. I went back to the starting town, fighting more imps, and I looked around the shops. There wasn't too much I could buy with 100 gold, but I could save it up for later. I ran to the roads leading out of town. 'Where should I go first?' I thought as I surveyed the roads. At almost every one guards warned me that I wasn't strong enough to go there yet, so I went through the one labeled 'Volcanic Crater'.

There were a lot of dragon enemies, and I noticed that the volcano that it appeared that I was in looked like it was about to erupt. I battled a few dragon enemies and walked on until the end of the area. I was about to go through the door when a player I didn't know messaged me.
[Eroth: I wouldn't go in there yet.] I looked around for the source of the message, and sure enough, there was an Elven warrior named Eroth standing by the door. He had brown hair and green eyes. I decided to reply.
[Raven: Why?]
[Eroth: It's the boss chamber, there's a level 3 boss phoenix in there.]
[Raven: Well do you want to take it on together? We're both level 2, our combined strength should be enough to beat it.]
[Eroth: Sure, but I warn you, if we lose we go back to level 1.]
[Raven: Stop being such a pessimist and let's go.]
[Eroth: (Jk) ok let's go.]
We entered the boss chamber and the door closed behind us, leaving what looked like a solid slab of rock behind us. The phoenix majestically rose from its spot and flew over to us, beginning the battle. Eroth slashed at its talon, distracting it while I cast a spell of ice, freezing it for a bit.
[Raven: Get it's tail!]
[Eroth: ok]
Eroth slashed at the phoenix's tail, damaging it but spawning firebirds. Oh great, more enemies. I sent a spell at them while Eroth worked on defeating the phoenix. The firebirds got hit, effectively defeating the level one enemies, and I sent another freezing spell at the phoenix. The phoenix screeched as we struck the final blow, and it dropped a chest. We opened it, and inside was a staff, sword (both level 3), and two eggs.
[Raven: You can have the sword and an egg.]
[Eroth: Funny, I was just about to say that you could have the staff and an egg.]
We took our stuff, and a timer appeared once I picked up the egg.
[Raven: What's the egg for?]
[Eroth: It's a pet egg, and since it came from a phoenix, Im guessing its a phoenix egg.]
[Raven: Cool. Thanks]
I though he would go away after that, but he didn't. We quested the entire day, and by the end of the day, we were level 5 and ready to go to Cardinal Town. We were about to go on the road there when I heard my sister.
"Alexa! You've been on that game for hours! Mom says its time to get off!"
"One minute!" I yelled. I got on the game again.
[Raven: Mom says I got to go. Could you be on at 4 tomorrow?]
[Elroth: I'll try, if I can't be there go to Cardinal Town without me and do the quest there we can always fight the boss again.]
[Raven: Ok, see you later.] I logged off with that and went downstairs. Mom was standing there with a big smile on her face.
"Did you like the game Alexa?" she asked.
"Yeah," I said smiling.
"Dad will be here soon, and since its his first time seeing the new house because he was on a business trip, I thought we could make him dinner!" I groaned inwardly, but fake smiled as we prepared a wild rice soup for our family.

When Dad came home, we showed him around the house and ate. I wasn't paying attention too much when we talked because I was thinking about playing Omicron and how Eroth was starting to become a good friend. I did my homework to catch up to where my new classes were and then got ready to go to sleep.

Once my parents were out of the room, I opened Omicron and muted the sound, ready to immerse myself in the virtual world again. I did a quick search for Eroth and he wasn't on. I decided to wait until 4 tomorrow and I logged off and collapsed in my bed.

(Are you trying to hurt my feelings?! JK JK, anyway loved this chapter how old is Alexa? And wouldn't be more realistic if they died a couple times? They are just starting off. Let me guess Eroth will be one of her new class mates?)

 

[water1997]

No, not trying to hurt your feelings I liked your chapter.
Alexa is 13.
Its the easiest boss in the game it was only hard for Eroth because he didn't have the patience to get to level 3.
And he won't be in the story in real life yet...and his real life form won't be at her school yet... (Still planning, gonna write chapter 5 in the morning I'm tired)