Writing a story in a chicken's eyes! UPDATE Pg. 75!

[Mrs.brown]

 

[fishnet1971]

more more!!!!!

 

[ChickLover98]

Thanks everybody! I'll work on chapter 3 now!

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

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[ChickLover98]

Chapter 3!


In the next couple of days, Prim, Daisy, and I got to know each other. I’m glad that I have someone to stick up for me. I still am getting a lot of comments about being a ‘show bird’. It doesn’t bother me too much, but you know.
I’m sitting in the soft blankets again. I look around at all of the other chicks of whom I do not know their names.
Everyone is starting to get pretty white, black, and brown feathers on their wings. I lift up my pathetic wing only to see that I don’t have any feathers yet.
I look to my left, and suddenly, Primrose is sitting right beside me.
“Whoa, where did you come from?” I ask, astonished.
“Well, I guess you were daydreaming or something because you didn’t even notice me sitting here a couple of minutes ago,” she chirped.
“Oh, ok,” I cheep plainly.
She looks at me with that searching look of hers. I know she thinks that something is bothering me. To tell the truth, something is, but I don’t want to tell Prim. I know, she’s my friend, but I just… can’t.
“What is it?” she says, cocking her head.
“What is what?” I chirp.
“Oh, never mind,” she says, rolling her eyes.
She gets up and continues to walk across the softness to Daisy. I hope they’re not mad at me. If they’re mad at me, then I don’t know what I am going to do!
All of a sudden, a handsome chick that is black with a yellow belly walks up and plops himself down next to me. He is different, also! He has fuzzy feet, too! And no wing feathers! Maybe I am not an oddball after all!
“Hello there. What is your name?” he cheeps.
“Me? Oh, I’m Cloudy,” I squeak. Oh, no! He’s going to think I’m so stupid!
“Nice to meet you, I’m Onyx,” he says, smiling.
“Nice to meet you, too, Onyx,” I smile back.
“Hey, maybe would you want to go take a walk to the feeder with me?” he inquires.
“Yeah, that would be nice,” I say. My voice comes out all weird and I’m yelling at myself in my mind. I hope he doesn’t think I’m weird!
I walk again in the soft blankets, but this time with another Cochin! I can’t believe it!
I’m so happy, but then I lose my footing and I notice that my claw is caught on the soft. I’m frantically trying to get it out, when I tumble over and land on my head. Oh, no, I hope Onyx didn’t notice!
I run to catch up with him as he continues walking.
“You ok?” he asks me.
“Uh, yeah. I’m fine,” I say, relieved that he didn’t notice.
We finally reach the watering jar and we have to duck under lot’s of angered chicks to finally reach it. I take a cool sip of water, and then I look up. I see Onyx and I standing together. I look so dumb, just standing there.
I can’t believe he actually likes me.

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

 

[ChickLover98]

:d

Edit: The D refuses to be capital!!!

 

[ChickLover98]

I hope its not getting boring or anything.

 

[Moonkit]

Its not.. can't wait for the next chapter.

Although in Chapter 3...

I’m so happy, but then I loose my footing and I notice that my claw is caught on the soft.

soft what?​

 

[ChickLover98]

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soft what?

That's what they call the towels lining their brooder...