Nono! It doesn't matter! As long as you write a story based off the prompt and the WOTW you're perfectly fine!OMG I’m so sorry I didn’t realise sorry
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Nono! It doesn't matter! As long as you write a story based off the prompt and the WOTW you're perfectly fine!OMG I’m so sorry I didn’t realise sorry
Thx for your feedback, Autocorrect kept ‘correcting’ me. I’m so sorry. I forget to bring in bravery, I will write another one as I am not sure I could correct that whole thing, may I write another story?Very descriptive!
First things first. You keep switching between past and present tense, I don't know whether you mean to stay in present but that's the first flaw I see.
Secondly, when you end dialogue, you need to put a comma inside the quotations unless you're starting a new sentence. That way its less confusing and you don't have to make repetitive short sentences.
Thirdly, I see you don't know how to use Your or You're. Where you said: "I want to know why your here?" You should have used You're because she's asking I want to know why you are here.
Fourthly, back to that same sentence, "I want to know why your here?" She isn't asking a question, she is stating something, therefore it should be a period, not a question mark.
Fifthly, I see quite a few sentences in need of commas where you didn't put commas. But you can always work on that. Just read slowly and ask yourself, does a comma belong here?
Lastly, I don't really see anything relating to Bravery. Can you point out to me where you icorporated that into the story?
Same. I don't know where to start.I need help.
You're the one who let that PM die.Same. I don't know where to start.
You're the one who let that PM die.![]()
but we're here now AND BAMSCRAMPARAMWOOT.
That PM was for me to stop doing this.but we're here now AND BAMSCRAMPARAMWOOT.