Nono! It doesn't matter! As long as you write a story based off the prompt and the WOTW you're perfectly fine!OMG I’m so sorry I didn’t realise sorry
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Nono! It doesn't matter! As long as you write a story based off the prompt and the WOTW you're perfectly fine!OMG I’m so sorry I didn’t realise sorry
Thx for your feedback, Autocorrect kept ‘correcting’ me. I’m so sorry. I forget to bring in bravery, I will write another one as I am not sure I could correct that whole thing, may I write another story?Very descriptive!
First things first. You keep switching between past and present tense, I don't know whether you mean to stay in present but that's the first flaw I see.
Secondly, when you end dialogue, you need to put a comma inside the quotations unless you're starting a new sentence. That way its less confusing and you don't have to make repetitive short sentences.
Thirdly, I see you don't know how to use Your or You're. Where you said: "I want to know why your here?" You should have used You're because she's asking I want to know why you are here.
Fourthly, back to that same sentence, "I want to know why your here?" She isn't asking a question, she is stating something, therefore it should be a period, not a question mark.
Fifthly, I see quite a few sentences in need of commas where you didn't put commas. But you can always work on that. Just read slowly and ask yourself, does a comma belong here?
Lastly, I don't really see anything relating to Bravery. Can you point out to me where you icorporated that into the story?
Same. I don't know where to start.I need help.
You're the one who let that PM die.Same. I don't know where to start.
You're the one who let that PM die.
but we're here now AND BAMSCRAMPARAMWOOT.
That PM was for me to stop doing this.but we're here now AND BAMSCRAMPARAMWOOT.