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would someone please give me criticism
Fine. You asked for it.
I couldn't read through it because of the fighting. Fite scenes are a drag for me when they are long.
I'll go take a looky at it.
If you criticize mine that would help too.
It's kinda boring though, and I have no idea how the plot would go out.
 
Fine. You asked for it.
I couldn't read through it because of the fighting. Fite scenes are a drag for me when they are long.
I'll go take a looky at it.
If you criticize mine that would help too.
It's kinda boring though, and I have no idea how the plot would go out.
Tank yo :D
Both or number one or number two?
 

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