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Indigo's magical voice was calm. "Hello, I am Indigo Alan. I want to help you. What do you know about the key?" she asked, her magical voice squeezing the answer out of him, undetected, coaxing him gently, but she was forcing him to answer. Indigo smiled the most beautiful smile as she towered over him. She crouched by him to show she meant no harm, and it was not hard to believe her, her beautiful violet eyes filled with kindness, her voice more beautiful than any music in the world.
(Can you put the controlling voice in bold so we can see it I can't tell what's italicized.)
 
Wolfram hissed at her, not fooled by her tricks.She is just like Mapleshade...."I know nothing of a key! And I don't want your help!"He snapped.
(Her tricks are undetectable, unless you have experienced it before, and impossible to resist unless have you have mind powers. You can fight it though, just not for very long.)
"Ok, I believe you," Indigo. "It's ok, you'll be alright." She tactically tried to calm him down. "Do you know why these men have come for you? What is the connection?"
 
Wolfram snarled, his eyes narrowed. He was sitting next to Bleddyn."What do you want?"He growled, refusing to shake her hand.
Indigo's magical voice was calm. "Hello, I am Indigo Alan. I want to help you. What do you know about the key?" she asked, her magical voice squeezing the answer out of him, undetected, coaxing him gently, but she was forcing him to answer. Indigo smiled the most beautiful smile as she towered over him. She crouched by him to show she meant no harm, and it was not hard to believe her, her beautiful violet eyes filled with kindness, her voice more beautiful than any music in the world.
Wolfram hissed at her, not fooled by her tricks.She is just like Mapleshade...."I know nothing of a key! And I don't want your help!"He snapped.
(Her tricks are undetectable, unless you have experienced it before, and impossible to resist unless have you have mind powers. You can fight it though, just not for very long.)
"Ok, I believe you," Indigo. "It's ok, you'll be alright." She tactically tried to calm him down. "Do you know why these men have come for you? What is the connection?"
Lachlan still kneeled at Bleddyn's side, having not moved and not planning to. He blandly watched their conversation.
 
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(Her tricks are undetectable, unless you have experienced it before, and impossible to resist unless have you have mind powers. You can fight it though, just not for very long.)
"Ok, I believe you," Indigo. "It's ok, you'll be alright." She tactically tried to calm him down. "Do you know why these men have come for you? What is the connection?"
(That's a little...much, no? Beside, Wolfram is kinda used to mind manipulation from Mapleshade)

"No! I have no clue who they are. I never knew my mother knew about them, I've never heard about them."Wolfram growled.
 
(That's a little...much, no? Beside, Wolfram is kinda used to mind manipulation from Mapleshade)

"No! I have no clue who they are. I never knew my mother knew about them, I've never heard about them."Wolfram growled.
Something about Indigo made Alice uncomfortable. Why was she bugging him about the key too.

"just leave him alone." She said anger on her face.
 
Something about Indigo made Alice uncomfortable. Why was she bugging him about the key too.

"just leave him alone." She said anger on her face.
Wolfram looked over at her, a small smile on his face."I can deal with her."He told her, but his voice none hostile. He looked back at Indigo.
 
Something about Indigo made Alice uncomfortable. Why was she bugging him about the key too.

"just leave him alone." She said anger on her face.

Toby walked up to Alice. "There's something off about Indigo." He said quietly, uneasiness on his face. "We-we were talking & I felt…weird. Like I was oddly relaxed which never happens. Something about her seems really unnatural, like she's too perfect. Are you getting a weird vibe from her?" Toby asked, glancing from Alice to Indigo. When Wolfram stopped being mean, he turned and looked back at Alice. "See? Something's off. I don't trust her."
 
Wolfram looked over at her, a small smile on his face."I can deal with her."He told her, but his voice none hostile. He looked back at Indigo.
She was relieved that Wolfram seemed to have gained some confidence. She was terrified and now that she'd used her powers she was completely useless and vulnerable.
 

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