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Sparkle110 said:
OK

here's the drawing
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I'm just going to re-do this for pointers

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1. it's a bit bland to put a charcter just standing there, It dosen't really tell me much other than what this character looks like and what enviorment they live in,

but what I've done is put a little more in like....

I say a little bit of what her personally is, in my drawing, she looks sure of herself, and the wing the flopped over gives some friendliness (at least I think), the ears that are forwad says that she is aleart, and not lazy, ans she's not scared, beacuse her legs are firmly set on her turf, and she has not eyes like this
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also I disply the name as well.

2. your starting line for your wings is not that great, I see what you were trying to display, but no offence, you took it so far, the wings joint looks like it's backwards :(

what your starting line proably looked like
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with a simple feather pattern ( I use itfor quickes and practices, not the real-deals)
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it look good at a glance, but I'magine trying to fold that with a backwards joint?!
(Sorry if that sounded rude)
what I'm trying to say
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with a simple feather pattern
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the joint is fixed and that would be easy to fold (If you have chickens, just look at their wings, and how they fold (I hope you have a good tempered chicken to let you do that)

3. You made a great effort on the wing coloring, but I would aviod going for light blue to dark blue, it looks funny

that's just about all I had to say!
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