*Heat Of Battle*A Warrior Cat Role Play

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"Oh, are you sure that's all?" Bramblestar smiled and turned her head around, "Goldenpad, Maplepaw! Over here now!" she turned back to Ravenstar, "And it was five to three." she meowed coldly, "You fight like a mouse-heart." Bramblestar snarled and leapt at Ravenstar, slashing at her throat.

Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.

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Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.

~

Swanstar snarled,

Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"

(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)
Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.
~
Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.
~
Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.
~
Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.

 

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Quote: Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"
(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)
Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.
~
Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.
~
Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.
~
Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.
Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

 

 

 

"Oh, are you sure that's all?" Bramblestar smiled and turned her head around, "Goldenpad, Maplepaw! Over here now!" she turned back to Ravenstar, "And it was five to three." she meowed coldly, "You fight like a mouse-heart." Bramblestar snarled and leapt at Ravenstar, slashing at her throat.

Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.


~


Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.


~


Swanstar snarled,

Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"

(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)

Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.

~

Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.

~

Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.

~

Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.

Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)

Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.
(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)

 

[vachick15]

Quote: Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"
(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)

Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.

~

Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.

~

Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.

~

Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade. Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...) Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.
(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)
Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.

(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)

 

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"Oh, are you sure that's all?" Bramblestar smiled and turned her head around, "Goldenpad, Maplepaw! Over here now!" she turned back to Ravenstar, "And it was five to three." she meowed coldly, "You fight like a mouse-heart." Bramblestar snarled and leapt at Ravenstar, slashing at her throat.

Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.



~



Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.



~



Swanstar snarled,

Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"

(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)


Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.


~


Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.


~


Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.


~


Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.

Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)

Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.

(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)

Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.


​(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)

(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)
Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.
~
Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.
~
"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.

 

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Quote:Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.



~



Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.



~



Swanstar snarled,
Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)


Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.


~


Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.


~


Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.


~


Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.

(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.


(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)
Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.
~
Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.
~
"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.

(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.) Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan." ~ Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered.

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

Quote:Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.



~



Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.



~



Swanstar snarled,
Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)


Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.


~


Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.


~


Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.


~


Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.

(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.


(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)
Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.
~
Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.
~
"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.

(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.) Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan." ~ Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered.

(Blah) Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood. ~ Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars. ~ Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious. (What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD)

 

[vachick15]

Quote: Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"
(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)





Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.





~





Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.





~





Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.





~





Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade. Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...) Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.



(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?) Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.





(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...) (Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)

Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.

~

Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.

~

"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.


(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.)

Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan."
~
Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered. (Blah)
Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood.
~
Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars.
~
Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious.

(What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD)
(XD)
Rainspark glared at Bramblestar, Flamefang's claws were still unsheathed and he was breathing heavily.
~
Bramblestar faded away.
~
(Sure. I don't mind it's not that realistic, this is an RP.)

 

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"Oh, are you sure that's all?" Bramblestar smiled and turned her head around, "Goldenpad, Maplepaw! Over here now!" she turned back to Ravenstar, "And it was five to three." she meowed coldly, "You fight like a mouse-heart." Bramblestar snarled and leapt at Ravenstar, slashing at her throat.

Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.








~








Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.








~








Swanstar snarled,

Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"

(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)






Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.






~






Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.






~






Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.






~






Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.

Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)

Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.




(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)

Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.






​(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)

(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)


Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.


~


Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.


~


"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.[/quote]



(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.)


Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan."

~

Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered.[/quote]
(Blah)

Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood.

~

Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars.

~

Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious.


(What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD)[/quote]
(XD)
Rainspark glared at Bramblestar, Flamefang's claws were still unsheathed and he was breathing heavily.
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Bramblestar faded away.
~
(Sure. I don't mind it's not that realistic, this is an RP.)
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"Cats of ThornClan, follow me!Cats of The Dark Forest, go and meet your two leaders again, Oakstar and Branblestar.I will be back soon to receive my nine lives"Mapleheart yowled, before racing out of camp with her cats behind her.
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Ravenstar stood, panting beside her friends,"We won.But the battle isn't over.But the Raven and Rain really did join togather, and the Aflame did roar, and they did unite and they did Fource away he Bramble,"She heaved out,"Exept, now that pity hardly even made warrior made deputy made leader will be out for us,"she meowed.

 

[vachick15]

Quote: Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"
(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)






Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.






~






Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.






~






Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.






~






Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade. Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...) Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.




(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?) Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.






(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...) (Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)


Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.


~


Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.


~


"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.


(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.)


Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan."

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Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered. (Blah)

Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood.

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Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars.

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Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious.


(What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD) (XD)
Rainspark glared at Bramblestar, Flamefang's claws were still unsheathed and he was breathing heavily.
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Bramblestar faded away.
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(Sure. I don't mind it's not that realistic, this is an RP.) "Cats of ThornClan, follow me!Cats of The Dark Forest, go and meet your two leaders again, Oakstar and Branblestar.I will be back soon to receive my nine lives"Mapleheart yowled, before racing out of camp with her cats behind her.
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Ravenstar stood, panting beside her friends,"We won.But the battle isn't over.But the Raven and Rain really did join togather, and the Aflame did roar, and they did unite and they did Fource away he Bramble,"She heaved out,"Exept, now that pity hardly even made warrior made deputy made leader will be out for us,"she meowed.
"Maplepa-heart's a good fighter." Rainspark meowed, "I saw her fighting Icepool, but she'll be easier than Bramblestar. I know that." then she gasped, "What about you! You only have five? Four? Lives left, if there's another battle with her, it won't be a fair fight."
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Lilypool padded up to Rainspark, Flamefang and Ravenstar, "We must go soon." she meowed and licked her kit's heads.