Punky & Yard Full - I have never claimed to be an expert, but I will say that I've spoken with several judges, and have memberships on several poultry forums, including a very large plymouth rock forum. That doens't mean squat, other than I have done a ton of research & reading.
Scott is exactly right - the feathering definitely needs to be tighter in my line - Punky, as I indicated, there are MANY things that need to be worked on with this variety and I'll be the first to say I have a LONG way to go. I'm looking at probably 4-5 years before these are close to standard. These silver pencileds have come back from virtually the brink of being completely obliterated. The stock that was out there when I began working with them was...well...crappy, to say the least. I got a few lines of them and culled heavily and will continue to do so, but again, I have a long way to go.
I have a judge working closely with me, along with a longtime PR breeder, and I have learned a ton from them and will hopefully continue to do so. Everyone I have spoken with tells me the same thing that Scott mentioned - work on type...type, type, type. Build the barn, then paint it. My barn has a good foundation, and this year, the frame of the barn is looking nice...maybe next year, the roof?
Certainly, critique away! I always welcome feedback, and please know that I DO KNOW my line has a long way to go. I tell anyone that wants to learn about interpreting the SOP and showing birds to get a variety that's not very popular, such as the silver penciled rocks...you'll learn SO much along the way, and there are tons of peeps that truly enjoy working with you - espeically those long-time breeders that don't want to see a variety go by the wayside. It's been interesting, educational, fun, frustrating...I love it!
I'm told the penciling in my line is good & crisp - a bit smutty on a few, but correct & crisp on others. My biggest worry going forward is losing the crisp penciling while I'm working on type. We'll see how that goes!