gogogoI think I'mma just do a Skoll (My character) one because I can't decide on how to make this new character XD
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gogogoI think I'mma just do a Skoll (My character) one because I can't decide on how to make this new character XD
imagine what it is like thenI don't know Bravery. ;-;
I always make a new character because I can't imagine this or that character in this or that setting. They are special to their plots.I think I'mma just do a Skoll (My character) one because I can't decide on how to make this new character XD
I've gotten a few sentances. I don't know how to introduce bravery. ;-;imagine what it is like then
stop procrastinating T_T
do a heroic actI've gotten a few sentances. I don't know how to introduce bravery. ;-;
;-;do a heroic act
Thx, I’m glad I’m improving at least now I’m awake. I do have a tendency to switch tencesGo ahead!
We all do
Me lick
I cant really give any criticism since we're really on the same level but I do see commas in unnecessary places
It wasnt hopeless! We have to start somewhere dont we?
*blocks and points to chair*
Sit the heck down.
I had a hard time choosing one too
Good job!
Again you're switching in and out of tenses here and there but you're getting better ^^
Unecasarry commas as well and areas where commas are needed (I absolutely suck at punctuation so don't worry about it)
One thing I see is that people- especially younger kids - use slang and words like 'things' and 'stuff' 'better' ect in their writing. Try not to use those words, it makes your writing a lot more formal and overall explicit for the reader.
Old time England.Misty, I can't pick a setting. ;-;