Reviews by casportpony

Nice article. It could be improved by fixing the spelling and grammatical errors.

@BantyChooks

Good start. This article could be improved by fixing the spelling and grammatical errors, and like @BantyChooks suggested, adding info about meat spots, calcium deposits, & fart eggs.

Additionally, add a link to one of BYC's threads or articles about actual egg problems.

If you fix the spell & grammar, I will re-rate this.

Great article! An easy informative read. If I ever want to make a kill cone, I will refer to this article for sure.

Nice article. It could be improved by fixing the spelling and grammatical errors and changing the format a little. For example, the Integration, Flock behavior section is hard to read because it's a block of text that looks like it's missing line breaks.

Make those changes and I will re-review it.

Grammarly has a free spell checker.

Good start.

This article could be improved by:

Fixing the broken picture
Using a picture of a chicken chick, not a poult.
Use a picture that you took, not one from Shutterstock
Adding pictures of each topic and links to other BYC articles and threads. For example in your brooder paragraph, add a link to the Brooding and supplementing heat for chicks thread

Did you use AI to write this? If so, you should give credit to the AI.

Good start. This article could be improved by adding pictures of each topic and links to other BYC articles and threads. For example in your predator paragraph, add a link to the Topic of the Week - Keeping the Flock Safe from Predators thread.

Did you use AI to write this? If so, you should give credit to the AI.

Good start! To improve this article, I would add a picture of the finished coop at the top of the article, replace all of the small pictures with larger ones, add more pictures of it being built, add written build details, and add a list of the materials used.

Good article. This could be improved by adding links to other BYC articles or discussion threads.

Fun article. This could be improved by adding pictures of the chicken's anatomy, showing where the "breast" is, and the waterer "nipples"

Great article. It could be improved by fixing this link:
small plastic bench

This article could be improved by adding:

Canker is the flagellate protozoan parasite
It is also called frounce
It is common in pigeons, doves, & raptors
It is rare in poultry
Birds can recover but may be carriers

Treatment - The drugs to treat are listed, but the dosing is missing. I would like to see the doses for each drug listed.

Good start! To improve this article, I would replace all of the small pictures with larger ones, add pictures of it being built, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Good start! To improve this article, I would replace all of the small pictures with larger ones, add more pictures of it being built, pictures of the inside, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Good start! To improve this article, I would replace all of the small pictures with larger ones, add more pictures of it being built, pictures of the inside, a picture of the finished coop at the top of the article, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Cute coop! To improve this article, I would add more pictures of it being built, pictures of the inside, a picture of the finished coop at the top of the article, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Good start! To improve this article, I would add pictures of it being built, pictures of the inside, a picture of the finished coop at the top of the article, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Good start! To improve this article, I would add more pictures of it being built, a picture of the finished coop & run at the top of the article, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.

Good start! To improve this article, I would add pictures of it being built, pictures of the inside, a picture of the finished coop at the top of the article, written build details, and a list of the materials that were used.