A few of my thoughts:
- First, more details. How does this work? What is bumblefoot exactly? Forms of severity? More details on the treatment would help, along with options.
- More pictures. Showing what you did is always helpful
- Fixing grammatical errors would help.
- You don’t bring a chicken to the doctor-you bring them to the veterinarian. Most people would understand this though. Just making sure facts are straight and clear.
- Adding why the banana peel works would help. I don’t know why this would work, however. Scientific evidence is needed. I know that banana peels have potassium, and the ability to draw metals out of water, but how does that affect bumblefoot? Personally, I don’t believe this would help. It reminds me of the people who say ‘put an onion in your sock at night to draw toxins out of your body!’ Or ‘use oregano oil and it’ll cure your eyesight’ or ‘carrots cure cancer!’ Scientific evidence is needed in all of these cases. We need more than ‘banana peels cure bumblefoot’
- Providing links to references and sources are always beneficial
- Adding information on other treatment helps - such as bumblefoot surgery.
