*Heat Of Battle*A Warrior Cat Role Play
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Ravenstar wanted to call to Goldentail, but she saw her and her two dead, and her two living kits togather and left them.She stood next to Rainspark, Flamefang, Lilypool, Brakenfur, Fernshade, Foxfire, Fernheart, and Swanstar,"Thank you"She murmured,"So much.We wouldn't have won without you, Or you, Rainspark, or you, Flamefang"she meowed softly.
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Mapleheartentered camp,"Now, I must go and revive my nine lives!"She meowed.Leaving the camp, she padded up to the Dark Stone(Wich, is like the Moon Stone, but it's the Dark Stone)And touched her nose to it and woke up, seeing Oakstar, Hawkpool, Bramblestar, and 6 other cats, standing.Oakstar padded forward,"Mapleheart,"he meowed,"Withthis life I give you love, for parenting, to be the best mother to even the oldest elders,"He meowed,"It is very importent"A spasm shook trough her body, leaving her gasping,"And eight more of these?!"she muttered.Hawkpool padded forward."Mapleheart, I give you this life for Hunting and speed.To run the longest field, to hunt the biggest rabbit.Use it well t feed you Clan and protect yourself,"She murmured, she watched as a Spasm shook through Maplehearts body.6 more cats padded forward, with the names of Minnowslip, Willowheart, Sunflash, Thornstirke, Birdsong, and Fawnfoot."With this life I give you Good Choice, to make the right choices for your own good and your Clans,"Minnowslip murmured, as he bowed his head.Mapleheart wanted to fall to the ground, but she stayed storng.Willowheart padded forward."With this life I give you Mentoring,"She murmured,"To train the apprentices of your Clan well,"She watched and then stepped back, letting Sunflash give her another life,"With this life I give you Stregth, to be stronger then ever in any battle,"She murmured, and then stepped back.Thornstirke then gave her a life for Thoughtfulness, Birdsong and Fawnfoot haver her both lives for Engery.Mapleheart, by now was shaking and weak, she waited for her last life.
(Make Bramblestars sister!!)[/quote]
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Mapleheartentered camp,"Now, I must go and revive my nine lives!"She meowed.Leaving the camp, she padded up to the Dark Stone(Wich, is like the Moon Stone, but it's the Dark Stone)And touched her nose to it and woke up, seeing Oakstar, Hawkpool, Bramblestar, and 6 other cats, standing.Oakstar padded forward,"Mapleheart,"he meowed,"Withthis life I give you love, for parenting, to be the best mother to even the oldest elders,"He meowed,"It is very importent"A spasm shook trough her body, leaving her gasping,"And eight more of these?!"she muttered.Hawkpool padded forward."Mapleheart, I give you this life for Hunting and speed.To run the longest field, to hunt the biggest rabbit.Use it well t feed you Clan and protect yourself,"She murmured, she watched as a Spasm shook through Maplehearts body.6 more cats padded forward, with the names of Minnowslip, Willowheart, Sunflash, Thornstirke, Birdsong, and Fawnfoot."With this life I give you Good Choice, to make the right choices for your own good and your Clans,"Minnowslip murmured, as he bowed his head.Mapleheart wanted to fall to the ground, but she stayed storng.Willowheart padded forward."With this life I give you Mentoring,"She murmured,"To train the apprentices of your Clan well,"She watched and then stepped back, letting Sunflash give her another life,"With this life I give you Stregth, to be stronger then ever in any battle,"She murmured, and then stepped back.Thornstirke then gave her a life for Thoughtfulness, Birdsong and Fawnfoot haver her both lives for Engery.Mapleheart, by now was shaking and weak, she waited for her last life.
(Make Bramblestars sister!!)[/quote]
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Nettlewater quickly brought over Watermint, Cobwebs, and Dock over and dropped it near Crowflight and Amberpool,"Rub the dock on your scratches, bind your cuts and bites with Cobwebs, and take the Watermint for Stregth,"She ordered, doing the same to every cat and then went to Smokesong, Fernheart and the other new warriors and dropped the herbs near them.
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Honeypaw smiled, even tough her white fur was smeared with blood, she looked like a red cat almost.Her brown eyes gleamed with revenge, as she listened to Snowkit who was exsitedly bouncing around her, while Badgerkit, and Owlkit bounced, telling stories aswell.
(OK I'm only keeping these kits.Windfur:Owl(eye, M) Birchkit(Claw, M)and Nightkit(Flower, F)Sparrowflight:Badgerkit(Fur, F)Briarkit(unsure yet, one dead front paw, F)Spottedkit(leaf, F) and Swankit(Fur, F)
(Sweetpaw can become a full medicine cat, and then she makes Briarkit her apprentice?)
That would mean we would have to kill of Eather Nettlewater or Flameclaw, and I don't really want to kill of Nettlewater.......)
(Darn, you're right... One of them could retire, but if it was Nettlewater you couldn't do that thing with Prez... I don't know, never mind!)
(I could ask Feather Hearts if Flameclaw could retire, after all, he must be old.I just Re-posted Ravenstar and Mapleheart post for you, in case you didn't see it)
Quote:Goldenpad couldn't hear within the screeching as she was on the other side of the clearing.And Maplepaw was fighting Icepool.
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Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.
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Swanstar snarled,
Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)
Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.
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Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.
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Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.
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Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.
(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.
(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)
Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.
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Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.
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"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.
(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.)
Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan."
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Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered.(Blah)
Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood.
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Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars.
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Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious.
(What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD)(XD)
Rainspark glared at Bramblestar, Flamefang's claws were still unsheathed and he was breathing heavily.
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Bramblestar faded away.
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(Sure. I don't mind it's not that realistic, this is an RP.)"Cats of ThornClan, follow me!Cats of The Dark Forest, go and meet your two leaders again, Oakstar and Branblestar.I will be back soon to receive my nine lives"Mapleheart yowled, before racing out of camp with her cats behind her.
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Ravenstar stood, panting beside her friends,"We won.But the battle isn't over.But the Raven and Rain really did join togather, and the Aflame did roar, and they did unite and they did Fource away he Bramble,"She heaved out,"Exept, now that pity hardly even made warrior made deputy made leader will be out for us,"she meowed."Maplepa-heart's a good fighter." Rainspark meowed, "I saw her fighting Icepool, but she'll be easier than Bramblestar. I know that." then she gasped, "What about you! You only have five? Four? Lives left, if there's another battle with her, it won't be a fair fight."
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Lilypool padded up to Rainspark, Flamefang and Ravenstar, "We must go soon." she meowed and licked her kit's heads.Ravenstar wanted to call to Goldentail, but she saw her and her two dead, and her two living kits togather and left them.She stood next to Rainspark, Flamefang, Lilypool, Brakenfur, Fernshade, Foxfire, Fernheart, and Swanstar,"Thank you"She murmured,"So much.We wouldn't have won without you, Or you, Rainspark, or you, Flamefang"she meowed softly.
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Mapleheartentered camp,"Now, I must go and revive my nine lives!"She meowed.Leaving the camp, she padded up to the Dark Stone(Wich, is like the Moon Stone, but it's the Dark Stone)And touched her nose to it and woke up, seeing Oakstar, Hawkpool, Bramblestar, and 6 other cats, standing.Oakstar padded forward,"Mapleheart,"he meowed,"Withthis life I give you love, for parenting, to be the best mother to even the oldest elders,"He meowed,"It is very importent"A spasm shook trough her body, leaving her gasping,"And eight more of these?!"she muttered.Hawkpool padded forward."Mapleheart, I give you this life for Hunting and speed.To run the longest field, to hunt the biggest rabbit.Use it well t feed you Clan and protect yourself,"She murmured, she watched as a Spasm shook through Maplehearts body.6 more cats padded forward, with the names of Minnowslip, Willowheart, Sunflash, Thornstirke, Birdsong, and Fawnfoot."With this life I give you Good Choice, to make the right choices for your own good and your Clans,"Minnowslip murmured, as he bowed his head.Mapleheart wanted to fall to the ground, but she stayed storng.Willowheart padded forward."With this life I give you Mentoring,"She murmured,"To train the apprentices of your Clan well,"She watched and then stepped back, letting Sunflash give her another life,"With this life I give you Stregth, to be stronger then ever in any battle,"She murmured, and then stepped back.Thornstirke then gave her a life for Thoughtfulness, Birdsong and Fawnfoot haver her both lives for Engery.Mapleheart, by now was shaking and weak, she waited for her last life.
(Make Bramblestars sister!!)
(I will, I will!) Bramblestar stepped forward reluctantly, she wasn't against Mapleheart becoming leader, but it wasn't her greatest wish for another cat to stand where she so recently stood, "With this life I give you loyalty, vigorous loyalty. May you use it for your Clan, and the ones closest to you." ~ Rainspark nuzzled Ravenstar, "You fought really well." she meowed. ~ Name: Briartail Age: Same age as Bramblestar, four moons older than Ravenstar. Gender: Female Personality: She can be nice, but mostly she doesn't really have a personality because she's wondering about her past. Clan: (Since you said separated at birth, should she be in DawnClan?) Description: Black with white paws, underbelly and muzzle and her sister's ice blue eyes. History: She was separated at birth, so she doesn't know Bramblestar was her sister. A day after her birth, she was brought to (DawnClan?) and raised by a queen there. When Bramblestar came as a young kit, trained to be a spy, she stayed away from her, wary of who she was. They were made apprentices at the same time, but were never taken out hunting or training together merely out of coincidence. She was made a warrior with Bramblestar, or heart, at the time and has lived somewhat normally ever since. She is never really around other cats, unless asked to go on patrol. Mate: None Kits: None Rank: Warrior Username: Vachick15
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Ravenstar snarled, yelping.She bit down as hard as StarClan on Bramblestars throught.
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Swanstar snarled,
Bramblestar blacked out and woke up with (would it be two or three lives?) and bit down on Ravenstar's neck until she was sure a life would be taken, then screeched again furiously to Goldenpad "Get over here, mouse-brain! And help Oakstar!" she turned her head to Maplepaw and yowled, "Leave the kittypet and get over here now!"(Would be two, and they are all the way across the clearing.XD)
Maplepaw snarled,"Im sorry!"she yowled. Bing pinned.
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Ravenstar blacked out, waking up with five lives.She snarled,"This battle won't end till you both are dead"she snarled.She saw Fernshade sneak up behind Oakstar, but she clamped her jaws around Bramblestars throat, hearing a crack.
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Fernshade lept onto Oakstars back, snapping his head and then slashing his belly.
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Oakstar chocked,"Good bye, Bramblestar,"He chocked, even though he Proboly would see her again, being sent to the Dark Forest.He sucked in a breath and died.A cry rang out,"REVENGE!"From Fernshade.Bramblestar lost a lfie and bit down as hard as she could on Ravenstar's throat, not letting go even when Ravenstar woke up. (I'm scared of what might happen when Bramblestar dies...)Ravenstar kicked Bramblestar away, she wasnt going to lose aother life.She snarled.Angerly, she lept onto Bramblestars back, raking it.
(Goldenpad will become Goldenstar, make Maplepaw a warrior, then her deputy.XD.Im not sure, you could like.OHHH, make a warrior, that has the stuffix Bramble, and then we could say she was Bramblestars daughter and Goldenpad could maker her deputy?)Bramblestar threw her off and slashed at her muzzle.
(Actually, I was thinking of when Bramblestar dies she quickly makes Maplepaw a warrior and tells her she will be leader, even though she never had an apprentice, because she's about the only cat Bramblestar truly trusts. Bramblestar never fully forgave Goldenpad for giving her away (she holds serious grudges, look how she acted when she first met Hawkpool). If we go with your way, I like the last part, except Bramblestar never had a mate...)(Love it, I want Maplepaws name to be Mapleheart, after Bramblestar.)
Maplepaw screeched, as she saw Ravenstar try to give Bramblestar the last death low.
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Ravenstar yowled."Goodbye, Bramblestar"she snarled, grasping Bramblestars throat in her mouth, and biting down as hard, harder then ever.
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"NO!BRAMBLESTAR!"Maplepaw screeched, racing over.
(I didn't think it'd come this fast but, eh, OK.)
Bramblestar gasped and choked out, "Maplepaw. You will be known as Mapleheart, and I make you leader of ThornClan."
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Rainspark and Flamefang raced over, and just for good measure, Flamefang slashed his claws across Bramblestar's throat viciously, Rainspark did the same, "That's for Lilypool." she whispered.(Blah)
Mapleheart reached her and licked her,"Bramblestar!"she whispered.She was chocked with grief, her calico pelt matter with blood.
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Ravenstar gave a snort of contempt."THE BATTLE IS OVER!THE GREAT LEADERS ARE DEAD!"she yowled, pointing to Oakstars fading body and Bramblestars.
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Goldenpad had heard what Bramblestar had said, and she was ferious.
(What if......You made another cat, and she was a secret sister of Bramblestar, seperated to different mothers at birth so they never knew each other?!That,would be awesome!altough it isn't very realistic....XD)(XD)
Rainspark glared at Bramblestar, Flamefang's claws were still unsheathed and he was breathing heavily.
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Bramblestar faded away.
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(Sure. I don't mind it's not that realistic, this is an RP.)"Cats of ThornClan, follow me!Cats of The Dark Forest, go and meet your two leaders again, Oakstar and Branblestar.I will be back soon to receive my nine lives"Mapleheart yowled, before racing out of camp with her cats behind her.
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Ravenstar stood, panting beside her friends,"We won.But the battle isn't over.But the Raven and Rain really did join togather, and the Aflame did roar, and they did unite and they did Fource away he Bramble,"She heaved out,"Exept, now that pity hardly even made warrior made deputy made leader will be out for us,"she meowed."Maplepa-heart's a good fighter." Rainspark meowed, "I saw her fighting Icepool, but she'll be easier than Bramblestar. I know that." then she gasped, "What about you! You only have five? Four? Lives left, if there's another battle with her, it won't be a fair fight."
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Lilypool padded up to Rainspark, Flamefang and Ravenstar, "We must go soon." she meowed and licked her kit's heads.Ravenstar wanted to call to Goldentail, but she saw her and her two dead, and her two living kits togather and left them.She stood next to Rainspark, Flamefang, Lilypool, Brakenfur, Fernshade, Foxfire, Fernheart, and Swanstar,"Thank you"She murmured,"So much.We wouldn't have won without you, Or you, Rainspark, or you, Flamefang"she meowed softly.
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Mapleheartentered camp,"Now, I must go and revive my nine lives!"She meowed.Leaving the camp, she padded up to the Dark Stone(Wich, is like the Moon Stone, but it's the Dark Stone)And touched her nose to it and woke up, seeing Oakstar, Hawkpool, Bramblestar, and 6 other cats, standing.Oakstar padded forward,"Mapleheart,"he meowed,"Withthis life I give you love, for parenting, to be the best mother to even the oldest elders,"He meowed,"It is very importent"A spasm shook trough her body, leaving her gasping,"And eight more of these?!"she muttered.Hawkpool padded forward."Mapleheart, I give you this life for Hunting and speed.To run the longest field, to hunt the biggest rabbit.Use it well t feed you Clan and protect yourself,"She murmured, she watched as a Spasm shook through Maplehearts body.6 more cats padded forward, with the names of Minnowslip, Willowheart, Sunflash, Thornstirke, Birdsong, and Fawnfoot."With this life I give you Good Choice, to make the right choices for your own good and your Clans,"Minnowslip murmured, as he bowed his head.Mapleheart wanted to fall to the ground, but she stayed storng.Willowheart padded forward."With this life I give you Mentoring,"She murmured,"To train the apprentices of your Clan well,"She watched and then stepped back, letting Sunflash give her another life,"With this life I give you Stregth, to be stronger then ever in any battle,"She murmured, and then stepped back.Thornstirke then gave her a life for Thoughtfulness, Birdsong and Fawnfoot haver her both lives for Engery.Mapleheart, by now was shaking and weak, she waited for her last life.
(Make Bramblestars sister!!)
(I will, I will!) Bramblestar stepped forward reluctantly, she wasn't against Mapleheart becoming leader, but it wasn't her greatest wish for another cat to stand where she so recently stood, "With this life I give you loyalty, vigorous loyalty. May you use it for your Clan, and the ones closest to you." ~ Rainspark nuzzled Ravenstar, "You fought really well." she meowed. ~ Name: Briartail Age: Same age as Bramblestar, four moons older than Ravenstar. Gender: Female Personality: She can be nice, but mostly she doesn't really have a personality because she's wondering about her past. Clan: (Since you said separated at birth, should she be in DawnClan?) Description: Black with white paws, underbelly and muzzle and her sister's ice blue eyes. History: She was separated at birth, so she doesn't know Bramblestar was her sister. A day after her birth, she was brought to (DawnClan?) and raised by a queen there. When Bramblestar came as a young kit, trained to be a spy, she stayed away from her, wary of who she was. They were made apprentices at the same time, but were never taken out hunting or training together merely out of coincidence. She was made a warrior with Bramblestar, or heart, at the time and has lived somewhat normally ever since. She is never really around other cats, unless asked to go on patrol. Mate: None Kits: None Rank: Warrior Username: Vachick15
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Mapleheart shook, as the spasm rooked her body.She stared up a Bramblestar,"Im sorry, I'm so sorry"she whispered,"I didnt want this to happen this way, "she rubbed her head on Bramblestar before stepping back. ~ Oakstar held his head high,"Hail the new ThornClan leader!Maplestar!"he yowled.
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Ravenstar nuzzled her, then she felt blood."Rainspark!"she murmured, concerned when she saw that the Shecats shoulder was bleeding. (Briartail is perfecto.Should Brairtail someday find out that she is Bramblestars sister?)
Can we RP now?
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Yeh, why?Va and I are!
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