Lisa, I really like the last picture in this post. Overall I egree with everything you have stated. We have to keep in mind that she is only 8 months. I like her pose in the last picture, I would be proud to own this female. What I really like most is the wide open tail feathers, do not see that around here very often. Also I think the back is ok and the black bar seems a little excessive but is ok. I like her head and the way the neck arches connecting.
I expect you know by now that I like this pullet a lot. I like the way she carrys herself and the nice wide Back this is a good example of how to get the broad chest and open tail feathers.