The Monster Inside ***An apocalyptic thriller RP***

Is this a good idea?

  • Yes, you should make some more of these types of thriller RPs!!!

  • Yeah, I guess it's kinda cool, but a little scary for my taste.

  • Nah, too freaky. *bundles in blanket to ward off bad guys*

  • Yes, I think it's a cool idea, but I would prefer if you made other types of RPs.


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Aisling's heart pounded. "Alright. Don't die, okay?" She turned to go, grabbing Emily's hand as she went. She was about to round a corner when she came back. "Here...you'll need these more than me," She said, giving her most treasured pair of hard shoes. Then she was gone
You’re going to die.

“I’ll be fine,” Blake murmured, clenching his hand tightly around the shoe. The scuffling grew louder with each pound of his heart, with each gasping breath.

He backed himself up against the wall, wishing he had something to use in defense, other than his lone arm and an Irish dancing shoe. An AK-47 would be perfect right about now. The familiar feeling of it on his shoulder, the satisfying kick after squeezing the trigger.

The door shook as something heavy slammed into it, creating a large dent in the metal structure. Blake shuddered, the impending doom of his situation washing over him. Why do I always have to act as the hero?

The door slammed open, and a tall, incredibly thin figure stooped down to enter. It was misshapen, it’s arms and legs different lengths, making it limp and wobble. Its whitish grey skin was droopy, sagging down over its emaciated frame. As it waddled up to him, Blake felt the irrational urge to laugh bubble up in his throat. “This is your strongest brethren?”

… Yes.

There was something ominous in the voice, and Blake felt a shudder run through him. He glared at the0 monster.

Its eyes opened, showing glossy red spheres staring at him underneath wrinkles and bags.

For a moment, as he stared into those eyes, he felt peace. A strange, overwhelming peace that washed over him. His hand lowered, the shoe dropping to the ground. There was no reason to fight this thing. It was harmless… It was—

Something sank into Blake’s gut.

DIE!

The voice blasted and echoed in Blake’s ears, like the bomb that had taken his left arm from him so many years ago.

He stared in shock at the monster’s hand that was stuck inside of him. With a guttural moan, the tall figure yanked it out with a spurt of blood. Blake gasped, clamping his hand over the large wound. He felt no pain at first, only a shuddering chill as blood seeped through his fingers. No…

Once you’re dead, I may be gone, but my brethren will infect those girls. The voice giggled.

An image of Aisling running, terrified, with that little girl split through his head. NO! He thought, the pain finally hitting him as he reached down, clasping the shoe in his bloody hand. “You will not hurt them,” he growled, running forward and leaping through the air towards the monster.

The tall, thin creature barely had time to make a noise before the Irish dancing shoe slammed into its skull, a wretched crunch ringing through the air. Blake tumbled to the ground beside the crumpled monster, gasping at the pain in his gut. His vision darkened as he felt at the large wound that almost went completely through him. It was almost as large as his hand. He shuddered, his hand falling weakly from his stomach to the floor, landing in a puddle of blood that came from both him and the monster.

“Don’t die, okay?”

Aisling’s last words to him.

“Sorry,” He whispered, though he knew no one could hear him.

As all went dark for the last time, he couldn’t help but feel content in the fact that his death hadn’t been worthless. At least she was safe…
 
You’re going to die.

“I’ll be fine,” Blake murmured, clenching his hand tightly around the shoe. The scuffling grew louder with each pound of his heart, with each gasping breath.

He backed himself up against the wall, wishing he had something to use in defense, other than his lone arm and an Irish dancing shoe. An AK-47 would be perfect right about now. The familiar feeling of it on his shoulder, the satisfying kick after squeezing the trigger.

The door shook as something heavy slammed into it, creating a large dent in the metal structure. Blake shuddered, the impending doom of his situation washing over him. Why do I always have to act as the hero?

The door slammed open, and a tall, incredibly thin figure stooped down to enter. It was misshapen, it’s arms and legs different lengths, making it limp and wobble. Its whitish grey skin was droopy, sagging down over its emaciated frame. As it waddled up to him, Blake felt the irrational urge to laugh bubble up in his throat. “This is your strongest brethren?”

… Yes.

There was something ominous in the voice, and Blake felt a shudder run through him. He glared at the0 monster.

Its eyes opened, showing glossy red spheres staring at him underneath wrinkles and bags.

For a moment, as he stared into those eyes, he felt peace. A strange, overwhelming peace that washed over him. His hand lowered, the shoe dropping to the ground. There was no reason to fight this thing. It was harmless… It was—

Something sank into Blake’s gut.

DIE!

The voice blasted and echoed in Blake’s ears, like the bomb that had taken his left arm from him so many years ago.

He stared in shock at the monster’s hand that was stuck inside of him. With a guttural moan, the tall figure yanked it out with a spurt of blood. Blake gasped, clamping his hand over the large wound. He felt no pain at first, only a shuddering chill as blood seeped through his fingers. No…

Once you’re dead, I may be gone, but my brethren will infect those girls. The voice giggled.

An image of Aisling running, terrified, with that little girl split through his head. NO! He thought, the pain finally hitting him as he reached down, clasping the shoe in his bloody hand. “You will not hurt them,” he growled, running forward and leaping through the air towards the monster.

The tall, thin creature barely had time to make a noise before the Irish dancing shoe slammed into its skull, a wretched crunch ringing through the air. Blake tumbled to the ground beside the crumpled monster, gasping at the pain in his gut. His vision darkened as he felt at the large wound that almost went completely through him. It was almost as large as his hand. He shuddered, his hand falling weakly from his stomach to the floor, landing in a puddle of blood that came from both him and the monster.

“Don’t die, okay?”

Aisling’s last words to him.

“Sorry,” He whispered, though he knew no one could hear him.

As all went dark for the last time, he couldn’t help but feel content in the fact that his death hadn’t been worthless. At least she was safe…
(Wow....)
 
‘ I don’t care, as long as they stay out of my room. They seem mature enough not to break anything, at least I hope so. I don’t really have anything valuable anyways, so I don’t know what they could break.’
"Okay," Kit said, still unsure. "I'll go talk to them." She left and entered the room where Jean and Zayne were.
 
You’re going to die.

“I’ll be fine,” Blake murmured, clenching his hand tightly around the shoe. The scuffling grew louder with each pound of his heart, with each gasping breath.

He backed himself up against the wall, wishing he had something to use in defense, other than his lone arm and an Irish dancing shoe. An AK-47 would be perfect right about now. The familiar feeling of it on his shoulder, the satisfying kick after squeezing the trigger.

The door shook as something heavy slammed into it, creating a large dent in the metal structure. Blake shuddered, the impending doom of his situation washing over him. Why do I always have to act as the hero?

The door slammed open, and a tall, incredibly thin figure stooped down to enter. It was misshapen, it’s arms and legs different lengths, making it limp and wobble. Its whitish grey skin was droopy, sagging down over its emaciated frame. As it waddled up to him, Blake felt the irrational urge to laugh bubble up in his throat. “This is your strongest brethren?”

… Yes.

There was something ominous in the voice, and Blake felt a shudder run through him. He glared at the0 monster.

Its eyes opened, showing glossy red spheres staring at him underneath wrinkles and bags.

For a moment, as he stared into those eyes, he felt peace. A strange, overwhelming peace that washed over him. His hand lowered, the shoe dropping to the ground. There was no reason to fight this thing. It was harmless… It was—

Something sank into Blake’s gut.

DIE!

The voice blasted and echoed in Blake’s ears, like the bomb that had taken his left arm from him so many years ago.

He stared in shock at the monster’s hand that was stuck inside of him. With a guttural moan, the tall figure yanked it out with a spurt of blood. Blake gasped, clamping his hand over the large wound. He felt no pain at first, only a shuddering chill as blood seeped through his fingers. No…

Once you’re dead, I may be gone, but my brethren will infect those girls. The voice giggled.

An image of Aisling running, terrified, with that little girl split through his head. NO! He thought, the pain finally hitting him as he reached down, clasping the shoe in his bloody hand. “You will not hurt them,” he growled, running forward and leaping through the air towards the monster.

The tall, thin creature barely had time to make a noise before the Irish dancing shoe slammed into its skull, a wretched crunch ringing through the air. Blake tumbled to the ground beside the crumpled monster, gasping at the pain in his gut. His vision darkened as he felt at the large wound that almost went completely through him. It was almost as large as his hand. He shuddered, his hand falling weakly from his stomach to the floor, landing in a puddle of blood that came from both him and the monster.

“Don’t die, okay?”

Aisling’s last words to him.

“Sorry,” He whispered, though he knew no one could hear him.

As all went dark for the last time, he couldn’t help but feel content in the fact that his death hadn’t been worthless. At least she was safe…
(Like, seriously, that was sad...)
 
(Aww, sorry!! XD I dunno why I decided to make him die. It just felt right, lol. Especially when she said "Don't die, Okay?" lol)
(Don't be sorry. It was just amazing. And death makes writing really strong for the reader to read....I know this is an RP, but you know what I mean...unless all that I'm writing makes no sense :D )
 
"Mmhm," Jean sighed, ignoring the throb in her leg. Her mind lost track of time as she fell asleep.
"Okay," Kit said, still unsure. "I'll go talk to them." She left and entered the room where Jean and Zayne were.

Zayne closed his eyes, listening to the hushed chatter coming from the kitchen. He wondered what they were talking about. Was the owner of this apartment - Sky, was it? - going to let them stay overnight?
As Kit entered the room, Zayne opened his eyes, looking in her direction. “Hey,” he greeted, “I want to thank you again, for helping us. Most people would’ve just slammed the door in our faces. I really appreciate what you did.” He said, glancing towards Jean’s sleeping form. He didn’t know what he would’ve done had no one been home, or they ran into another monster.

You’re going to die.

“I’ll be fine,” Blake murmured, clenching his hand tightly around the shoe. The scuffling grew louder with each pound of his heart, with each gasping breath.

He backed himself up against the wall, wishing he had something to use in defense, other than his lone arm and an Irish dancing shoe. An AK-47 would be perfect right about now. The familiar feeling of it on his shoulder, the satisfying kick after squeezing the trigger.

The door shook as something heavy slammed into it, creating a large dent in the metal structure. Blake shuddered, the impending doom of his situation washing over him. Why do I always have to act as the hero?

The door slammed open, and a tall, incredibly thin figure stooped down to enter. It was misshapen, it’s arms and legs different lengths, making it limp and wobble. Its whitish grey skin was droopy, sagging down over its emaciated frame. As it waddled up to him, Blake felt the irrational urge to laugh bubble up in his throat. “This is your strongest brethren?”

… Yes.

There was something ominous in the voice, and Blake felt a shudder run through him. He glared at the0 monster.

Its eyes opened, showing glossy red spheres staring at him underneath wrinkles and bags.

For a moment, as he stared into those eyes, he felt peace. A strange, overwhelming peace that washed over him. His hand lowered, the shoe dropping to the ground. There was no reason to fight this thing. It was harmless… It was—

Something sank into Blake’s gut.

DIE!

The voice blasted and echoed in Blake’s ears, like the bomb that had taken his left arm from him so many years ago.

He stared in shock at the monster’s hand that was stuck inside of him. With a guttural moan, the tall figure yanked it out with a spurt of blood. Blake gasped, clamping his hand over the large wound. He felt no pain at first, only a shuddering chill as blood seeped through his fingers. No…

Once you’re dead, I may be gone, but my brethren will infect those girls. The voice giggled.

An image of Aisling running, terrified, with that little girl split through his head. NO! He thought, the pain finally hitting him as he reached down, clasping the shoe in his bloody hand. “You will not hurt them,” he growled, running forward and leaping through the air towards the monster.

The tall, thin creature barely had time to make a noise before the Irish dancing shoe slammed into its skull, a wretched crunch ringing through the air. Blake tumbled to the ground beside the crumpled monster, gasping at the pain in his gut. His vision darkened as he felt at the large wound that almost went completely through him. It was almost as large as his hand. He shuddered, his hand falling weakly from his stomach to the floor, landing in a puddle of blood that came from both him and the monster.

“Don’t die, okay?”

Aisling’s last words to him.

“Sorry,” He whispered, though he knew no one could hear him.

As all went dark for the last time, he couldn’t help but feel content in the fact that his death hadn’t been worthless. At least she was safe…

(That was sad. Really well written, but sad.)
 

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