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Tan ate at a calm pace, neither rushed, nor bored. She them went on to her preening. "And many other things too."

Fort jumped into her mound of dust, eager to get back to cleaning her feathers. "I feel like I've got grit all through them," she intoned, murmuring.
Red cocked her head. "And cutting too, I suppose, but what would we want to cut?"​

"Spokes, wheels, and paddles for expanding our design, of course!" Mumbled Tan, feathers in her beak.
 
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Fort jumped into her mound of dust, eager to get back to cleaning her feathers. "I feel like I've got grit all through them," she intoned, murmuring.
Red cocked her head. "And cutting too, I suppose, but what would we want to cut?"

"Spokes, wheels, and paddles for expanding our design, of course!" Mumbled Tan, feathers in her beak.

"Paddles? Why on earth would we need paddles?" Red asked, intriguied.
 
ray's two cents :

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"Spokes, wheels, and paddles for expanding our design, of course!" Mumbled Tan, feathers in her beak.

"Paddles? Why on earth would we need paddles?" Red asked, intriguied.​

"So the water can push them, turning the wheels, which turn the cog, which in turn crank whatever we build!"
 
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"Paddles? Why on earth would we need paddles?" Red asked, intriguied.

"So the water can push them, turning the wheels, which turn the cog, which in turn crank whatever we build!"

"Oh, those sorts of paddles." Red held up her sculpture. The wheel was small, but had paddles. "A bit of a scale model."
 
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Now was Attumnleaf dead and laying on the ground, or the months?...
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Sorry, it was just the way you put your sentence... And I have to be annoying.
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*Looks at spooky brain ghosts*
 
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Now was Attumnleaf dead and laying on the ground, or the months?...
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Sorry, it was just the way you put your sentence... And I have to be annoying.
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*Looks at spooky brain ghosts*

I just changed it.
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I saw the weird way I put it, so I edited, and honestly it isn't much better.
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And you put Months instead of Moths.
 

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