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[RiverStorm]

@CP Chicken What do you think of Erin Hunter`s books? I remember you said you`d read them, and am curious what you thought of them

 

[CP Chicken]

@CP Chicken What do you think of Erin Hunter`s books? I remember you said you`d read them, and am curious what you thought of them

Oh yeah, I haven't read many of them- only the first two Warrior's books... I have the attention span of a fruit fly and so I got distracted from reading them. The books are pretty awesome, though they don't interest me that much. I usually read books about humans that are sci-fi or mythological. Though, the Warrior's books are really well written and easy to read. I don't know, I have mixed feelings about Erin Hunter's books.

 

[RiverStorm]

Oh yeah, I haven't read many of them- only the first two Warrior's books... I have the attention span of a fruit fly and so I got distracted from reading them. The books are pretty awesome, though they don't interest me that much. I usually read books about humans that are sci-fi or mythological. Though, the Warrior's books are really well written and easy to read. I don't know, I have mixed feelings about Erin Hunter's books.

Okay! I like animal books the most (Novel POV ones) but have been looking for human Sci-fi ones, that are clean (No sex or language) And The Praegressus Project book series has caught my eye, have you read/heard of it?

 

[cathloveydovey]

Dude! This is totally awesome!

:3 ty

 

[Abriana]

Just finished this, I’m going to paint it and maybe do some clouds that say the word FREE.

 

[DiamondSwan]

The swan has returned. And I'm not sure if I feel like reading through 1,000 posts.

 

[cathloveydovey]

Just finished this, I’m going to paint it and maybe do some clouds that say the word FREE. View attachment 1238058

noooicceee

 

[Flufferes]

Im writing a story and I need ppls opinions on my first paragraph, you know how in Warriors Erin Hunter always puts at least one paragraph thats farther into the book before she actually starts the book? Thats what this is.

Misty stares at Grant petrified, her eyes dart to the chains around her wrists, and at the other end Grant holds them, something flickers in his eyes. Fear? Pain? Joy? Misty doesnt know but it puts an odd sense of terror in her. The chains jingle and echo through the temple, Maru behind him holds his hands in a paticular manner as he controls Grants blood. A smile spreads slowly through Maru's face, and he lowers his head as he starts to laugh sending a chill through Misty's entire being. He flicks a few fingers and sends Grant flying toward Misty, she turns and tries to run, but Maru makes Grant pull back the chains and collide with her. Grant lands on top of her, pinning her down and holding a knife to her throat, "Misty" He murmurs. "Whatever happens... Remember its not me doing it, its Maru." He coughs up globs of blood and a small amount trickles down the corner of his mouth. Maru laughs again, "It might be me making you do it Grant, but it will still techinally be you torturing her." He throws back his head, his matted fiery red hair clumped together with blood, he makes Grant pull the knife closer to Misty's throat. She yelps as the cold metal slowly cuts into her, Misty tries to shake Grant off but he keeps her down under him like dead weight. "Misty..." Grant begins to say, and thats when she hears something unsheath and the sickening noise of something cut through flesh. In the corner of her eye, she sees Grants head roll to the side, Misty releases a blood-curdling scream.

Prologue?
Ohhhh, I like it. I'm not good at writing tho so I don't know what to suggest.

 

[Chicken Whisper101]

Yeah alot of reading LOL

 

[cathloveydovey]

Prologue?
Ohhhh, I like it. I'm not good at writing tho so I don't know what to suggest.

Not sure tbh normally a prologue is at the end
but im flipping it around