The Night of the Mare

[Happy hen lover]

I love it . No spelling mistakes that I can see. I'm was not good in English class but about midway through when Livvy is just heading out . One sentence starts with Decided Livvy. It seems wrong ??

 

[ChickensForEggs2500]

This is amazing!!! Great wording, I like how you showed what was happening, rather than writing it. Keep it up!!!!!!!!

 

[cluckmecoop7]

Thank you so much all! I'm working on the second chapter right now! Hmm, I'll go back and check that.

 

[cluckmecoop7]

I love it . No spelling mistakes that I can see. I'm was not good in English class but about midway through when Livvy is just heading out . One sentence starts with Decided Livvy. It seems wrong ??

I caught that mistake and changed it! Thanks!

 

[LaFemmeKatia]

I like it. I want to read more!

 

[cluckmecoop7]

Thank you so much!

I just got a good start on Chapter 2, and I will hopefully be able to post it tomorrow. Thank you so much everybody for all the support!

 

[Happy hen lover]

I caught that mistake and changed it! Thanks!

Great! It is a good read can't wait for more.

 

[cluckmecoop7]

Great! It is a good read can't wait for more.

Thanks!

 

[ChickLover33]

That was a great story.

 

[cluckmecoop7]

(FYI I'm adding spoilers etc to make it harder for non BYC members to copy write.