Some editing to help with flow of text would help make the article better-- like paragraph separations and etc.
The Article has good information. It is a bit hard to read due to being written by a non English speaker. A native speaker could edit the article to make it better
If Ducks are like Chickens, He may recover over time. Some birds can regrow brain cells https://www.futurity.org/bird-brains-dying-cells-778072/
I like this build! An update on how it is working after several hatches and pictures of the hatched chicks would be a nice addition to the article
