I also had the thought that she’s up with Patsy and all the rest of the flock who’ve passed on tanking care of her now…Beautiful and tender! What a nice tribute. I was in tears at the end but I really loved this!
I do have a suggestion /request: Do you think you might somehow picture / paint her friends too? Mug shots, or body pics, small insets to the page, or however... I was sort of wanting to see each hen referred to with the last lines in each "refrain." I know them all, but some /many readers won't know the references.